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The homies

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Friends are forever

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Drama | 6 Reviews | 10 pages | 8 months ago | Draft 1

Summary

5 friends all trying to balance the weight of their personal lives and maintain a healthy friendship

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I got 3 pages in and gave up. This isn't formatted or done by someone who understands screenplay formatting.

6 months ago | read more...
Concept is not strong enough.
The first ten pages didn't draw me in.
The plot is not very good.
The protagonist or should I say protagonists are not interesting at all.
Scenes are not written well at all.
Dialogue is not well written.

3 months ago | read more...
I thought this was pretty good, and could probably be even better.

2 months ago | read more...
This is not how a screenplay is formatted. Google "Screenplay formatting" and then go to WriterDuet.com and start over again. There are far too many errors in formatting to be worth going through and correcting.

2 months ago | read more...
PROS
THEME. The theme of friendship and sticking together is one that anyone can relate to so it has a lot of potential whether with people reminiscing about the times they had that kind of experience, those living it and those yearning for it.

MALIKIH. Malikih's character was well-developed, he had a distinct voice, he was credible and he was compelling.

SUGGESTIONS FOR IMPROVEMENT
YOUR INTENT. There are a number of questions you should...

2 weeks ago | read more...

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