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Cowspiracy Ep 2

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Sci-Fi/Fantasy

The birth of a baby cow produces hope for a struggling farmer but also an unforseen detrimental magic

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Peer Rating: 17%
Industry Rating: N/A
2 Reviews | 26 pages | 3 months ago | Draft 1

Summary

There is trouble at the nearby facility and a worker named Terry has some conspiracies about it. Tagger, William and Paula find out their baby cow has magical abilities and may be able to help the struggling farmer get back on his feet.

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There is more that needs to be done. Needs lots of structuring n dialogue editing
In conclusions you need to revise your work. I fouñd that the concept was okhy. It is something that can get some audiences. However the story did not do quite well for me. The characters did not look convincing enough for me. I think some struggled in their own story. This was due to the dialogue which I think for me was the most poorly executed element in the screenplay. All the characters pretty much sounded the same. Each character must have...

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Isaac Chiswesha

A unique concept that needs to be massively fleshed out. Less exposition, more depth to the characters is needed. Lots of plot, but not a ton of story.
The concept is unique and potentially interesting, you just need to work on a more defined three act structure, characters with more layers, and a lot more show, don't tell style of storytelling over the massive exposition dumps. There are some very basic, fixable grammar errors, such as punctuation. Always proofread and go over any work that you think is finished. There's certainly strength to be had in the concept, but remember that there's a d...

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Tyler Robertson Top Reviewer

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