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Lost Souls - TV Pilot - Mother tv series
Genre: Horror,Drama
Past hauntings force a twin back to her hometown to deal with her sister's suicide and the mess she left behind.
3 weeks ago
reviews
46 pages
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HE IS HERE short
Genre: Horror,Mystery/Suspense,Thriller
A traumatised former lawyer feels a constant terrifying presence and struggles to understand if it is real or a product of his own mind.
2 months ago
1 reviews
36 pages
jerry hansen completed a review for
12 hours ago
Moving Day feature
Genre: Comedy,Horror,Mystery/Suspense
Review Rating:

first page We reveal ugh -- description only 6-time thing -- funny --- never heard that one ok - im getting ur more novelistic than i --- crisp clean scene description - what how u want a scene to go -- SHOW ME - scene descrip some but dialog that has subtext - in ur face even bar chat mini-drama (i never said this is easy... bane - also what makes it int'g) lone slug bottom pg5 lots of -ing pg6-7 - abandoned dialog EXT. APARTMENT COMPLEX – MORNING In the morning we reveal an ordinary apartment in a southern town in the United States. FADE IN: EXT. ROBIN HOOD TRAIL - EARLY MORNING We're FLYING above suburban America, DESCENDING SLOWLY toward a tree-lined street. EXT. - ROBIN HOOD TRAIL - DAY We're FLYING once again over Robin Hood Trail, ASCENDING SLOWLY. never heard big orange So, LA huh, the city of angels, the big naranja. dont know what this means AUSTIN That was his fault if we keeping it a buck. description - tell us what we see MRS. STARK Oh, that reminds me I have some things to give you guys. Mrs. Stark pulls out a box filled with things to give to Christina and Austin. incense Mrs. Stark pulls out multiple things. She pulls out a fertility blank. lots of sic --- their final hours end their apartment Dinner tomorrow at Luther’s tomorrow. pg36 pg42 A truck pulls up outside a watch Austin and Chris from afar. pg43 --- formatting AUSTIN No. It’s not that. (pause) I wanna marry you. pg48 --- many hints/foreshadows -- first overt dramatic action Two hooded people standing behind her and they take her. pg54 - im wondering where we are --- she's from tempe -- they were at her parents house - yet they left st louis for la .... ??? pg56 sic Greg gives a half ass salute ass everyone gets pg56 - need description EXT. STAGE - NIGHT Sheriff Kane and his men are outside cleaning up and getting ready to prepare for their ceremony. pg58 - finally something is happening p59 - They here a truck driving by in the distance and they both turn bales --- hay bails cool movie title: racist homicidal white trash but i like moving day too 1-2 sic per page --- spell-check doesnt fix context p77 --- this could be built-up - make it more dramatic, tense Merle turns around and walks back towards Chris’ table and looks under it but Chris has already left from under the table. p80 - no clue what this means Both men go back inside to come down and get the gun. p87 - a poker or stoker He enters the living room and grabs one of the tools from the fireplace. p88 - great place to end movie --- the last shot is ok ... expected KANE (CONT’D) One, you shoot her or I shoot you. That simple. Two, you don’t shoot her. I shoot you then I shoot her. Your world Violet. Make a choice.

4 weeks ago
1 reviews
90 pages
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17 hours ago
Sensational She-Hulk tv series
Genre: Comedy,Action/Adventure
An emergency blood transfusion from her cousin Bruce Banner transformed ordinary attorney Jennifer Walters into the extraordinary She-Hulk, who gains celebrity superhero status and an awareness that she’s a character on a television show.
3 weeks ago
reviews
29 pages
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Jimwell Camilon just claimed a review for a short script
1 day ago
For sale, baby shoes, never worn short
Genre: Drama,Mystery/Suspense,Romance
Preparing for the arrival of a baby, a couple is given two cute baby shoes. Will they ever be used?
5 days ago
reviews
9 pages
Jimwell Camilon uploaded a television screenplay
1 day ago
Crawl Don't Run tv series
Genre: Drama,Comedy
The tale of a comic legend who manages to find success despite suffering from a series of tragedies.
1 day ago
reviews
55 pages
Jimwell Camilon just joined ScriptMother!
1 day ago
jerry hansen just claimed a review for a feature script
1 day ago
Moving Day feature
Genre: Comedy,Horror,Mystery/Suspense
In an alternate reality a young couple's weekend stay at a small town hotel reveals bigger secrets that the town has been hiding.
4 weeks ago
1 reviews
90 pages
Sahar Itani just joined ScriptMother!
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Cyle Brooks uploaded a feature screenplay
2 days ago
Shadow Vile Figure feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Animation,Thriller
After getting God's permission to resurrect a dead teen, Satan doesn't realize his biggest fear is about to come true.
2 days ago
reviews
63 pages
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2 days ago
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Rick Clark uploaded a feature screenplay
2 days ago
Reparat ions For A Serial Killer feature
Genre: Crime,Drama
A SERIAL KILLER BELIEVES HE IS OWED REPARATIONS, HE INSISTS ON BEING PAID...IN FULL MEASURE.
2 days ago
reviews
118 pages
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Genre: Thriller,Mystery/Suspense
A careless young man finds his life falling apart after encountering a mysterious hooded stranger.

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ScriptMother Activity

Aiden Sherry just joined ScriptMother!
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becky Ford just claimed a review for a television script
5 hours ago
Lost Souls - TV Pilot - Mother tv series
Genre: Horror,Drama
Past hauntings force a twin back to her hometown to deal with her sister's suicide and the mess she left behind.
3 weeks ago
reviews
46 pages
becky Ford just joined ScriptMother!
5 hours ago
tania sofia garcia vidal just joined ScriptMother!
6 hours ago
Karen Zhou just joined ScriptMother!
6 hours ago
jerry hansen just claimed a review for a short script
9 hours ago
HE IS HERE short
Genre: Horror,Mystery/Suspense,Thriller
A traumatised former lawyer feels a constant terrifying presence and struggles to understand if it is real or a product of his own mind.
2 months ago
1 reviews
36 pages
jerry hansen completed a review for
12 hours ago
Moving Day feature
Genre: Comedy,Horror,Mystery/Suspense
Review Rating:

first page We reveal ugh -- description only 6-time thing -- funny --- never heard that one ok - im getting ur more novelistic than i --- crisp clean scene description - what how u want a scene to go -- SHOW ME - scene descrip some but dialog that has subtext - in ur face even bar chat mini-drama (i never said this is easy... bane - also what makes it int'g) lone slug bottom pg5 lots of -ing pg6-7 - abandoned dialog EXT. APARTMENT COMPLEX – MORNING In the morning we reveal an ordinary apartment in a southern town in the United States. FADE IN: EXT. ROBIN HOOD TRAIL - EARLY MORNING We're FLYING above suburban America, DESCENDING SLOWLY toward a tree-lined street. EXT. - ROBIN HOOD TRAIL - DAY We're FLYING once again over Robin Hood Trail, ASCENDING SLOWLY. never heard big orange So, LA huh, the city of angels, the big naranja. dont know what this means AUSTIN That was his fault if we keeping it a buck. description - tell us what we see MRS. STARK Oh, that reminds me I have some things to give you guys. Mrs. Stark pulls out a box filled with things to give to Christina and Austin. incense Mrs. Stark pulls out multiple things. She pulls out a fertility blank. lots of sic --- their final hours end their apartment Dinner tomorrow at Luther’s tomorrow. pg36 pg42 A truck pulls up outside a watch Austin and Chris from afar. pg43 --- formatting AUSTIN No. It’s not that. (pause) I wanna marry you. pg48 --- many hints/foreshadows -- first overt dramatic action Two hooded people standing behind her and they take her. pg54 - im wondering where we are --- she's from tempe -- they were at her parents house - yet they left st louis for la .... ??? pg56 sic Greg gives a half ass salute ass everyone gets pg56 - need description EXT. STAGE - NIGHT Sheriff Kane and his men are outside cleaning up and getting ready to prepare for their ceremony. pg58 - finally something is happening p59 - They here a truck driving by in the distance and they both turn bales --- hay bails cool movie title: racist homicidal white trash but i like moving day too 1-2 sic per page --- spell-check doesnt fix context p77 --- this could be built-up - make it more dramatic, tense Merle turns around and walks back towards Chris’ table and looks under it but Chris has already left from under the table. p80 - no clue what this means Both men go back inside to come down and get the gun. p87 - a poker or stoker He enters the living room and grabs one of the tools from the fireplace. p88 - great place to end movie --- the last shot is ok ... expected KANE (CONT’D) One, you shoot her or I shoot you. That simple. Two, you don’t shoot her. I shoot you then I shoot her. Your world Violet. Make a choice.

4 weeks ago
1 reviews
90 pages
Saif Maqbool just claimed a review for a television script
17 hours ago
Sensational She-Hulk tv series
Genre: Comedy,Action/Adventure
An emergency blood transfusion from her cousin Bruce Banner transformed ordinary attorney Jennifer Walters into the extraordinary She-Hulk, who gains celebrity superhero status and an awareness that she’s a character on a television show.
3 weeks ago
reviews
29 pages
Saif Maqbool just joined ScriptMother!
17 hours ago
Jimwell Camilon just claimed a review for a short script
1 day ago
For sale, baby shoes, never worn short
Genre: Drama,Mystery/Suspense,Romance
Preparing for the arrival of a baby, a couple is given two cute baby shoes. Will they ever be used?
5 days ago
reviews
9 pages
Jimwell Camilon uploaded a television screenplay
1 day ago
Crawl Don't Run tv series
Genre: Drama,Comedy
The tale of a comic legend who manages to find success despite suffering from a series of tragedies.
1 day ago
reviews
55 pages
Jimwell Camilon just joined ScriptMother!
1 day ago
jerry hansen just claimed a review for a feature script
1 day ago
Moving Day feature
Genre: Comedy,Horror,Mystery/Suspense
In an alternate reality a young couple's weekend stay at a small town hotel reveals bigger secrets that the town has been hiding.
4 weeks ago
1 reviews
90 pages
Sahar Itani just joined ScriptMother!
1 day ago
Cyle Brooks uploaded a feature screenplay
2 days ago
Shadow Vile Figure feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Animation,Thriller
After getting God's permission to resurrect a dead teen, Satan doesn't realize his biggest fear is about to come true.
2 days ago
reviews
63 pages
Cyle Brooks just joined ScriptMother!
2 days ago
Daksh Patel just joined ScriptMother!
2 days ago
Rick Clark uploaded a feature screenplay
2 days ago
Reparat ions For A Serial Killer feature
Genre: Crime,Drama
A SERIAL KILLER BELIEVES HE IS OWED REPARATIONS, HE INSISTS ON BEING PAID...IN FULL MEASURE.
2 days ago
reviews
118 pages
A review was just purchased for a feature script. Claim it here.
2 days ago
feature
Genre: Comedy,Horror,Mystery/Suspense
In an alternate reality a young couple's weekend stay at a small town hotel reveals bigger secrets that the town has been hiding.
A review was just purchased for a short script. Claim it here.
2 days ago
short
Genre: Thriller,Mystery/Suspense
A careless young man finds his life falling apart after encountering a mysterious hooded stranger.