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first page We reveal ugh -- description only 6-time thing -- funny --- never heard that one ok - im getting ur more novelistic than i --- crisp clean scene description - what how u want a scene to go -- SHOW ME - scene descrip some but dialog that has subtext - in ur face even bar chat mini-drama (i never said this is easy... bane - also what makes it int'g) lone slug bottom pg5 lots of -ing pg6-7 - abandoned dialog EXT. APARTMENT COMPLEX – MORNING In the morning we reveal an ordinary apartment in a southern town in the United States. FADE IN: EXT. ROBIN HOOD TRAIL - EARLY MORNING We're FLYING above suburban America, DESCENDING SLOWLY toward a tree-lined street. EXT. - ROBIN HOOD TRAIL - DAY We're FLYING once again over Robin Hood Trail, ASCENDING SLOWLY. never heard big orange So, LA huh, the city of angels, the big naranja. dont know what this means AUSTIN That was his fault if we keeping it a buck. description - tell us what we see MRS. STARK Oh, that reminds me I have some things to give you guys. Mrs. Stark pulls out a box filled with things to give to Christina and Austin. incense Mrs. Stark pulls out multiple things. She pulls out a fertility blank. lots of sic --- their final hours end their apartment Dinner tomorrow at Luther’s tomorrow. pg36 pg42 A truck pulls up outside a watch Austin and Chris from afar. pg43 --- formatting AUSTIN No. It’s not that. (pause) I wanna marry you. pg48 --- many hints/foreshadows -- first overt dramatic action Two hooded people standing behind her and they take her. pg54 - im wondering where we are --- she's from tempe -- they were at her parents house - yet they left st louis for la .... ??? pg56 sic Greg gives a half ass salute ass everyone gets pg56 - need description EXT. STAGE - NIGHT Sheriff Kane and his men are outside cleaning up and getting ready to prepare for their ceremony. pg58 - finally something is happening p59 - They here a truck driving by in the distance and they both turn bales --- hay bails cool movie title: racist homicidal white trash but i like moving day too 1-2 sic per page --- spell-check doesnt fix context p77 --- this could be built-up - make it more dramatic, tense Merle turns around and walks back towards Chris’ table and looks under it but Chris has already left from under the table. p80 - no clue what this means Both men go back inside to come down and get the gun. p87 - a poker or stoker He enters the living room and grabs one of the tools from the fireplace. p88 - great place to end movie --- the last shot is ok ... expected KANE (CONT’D) One, you shoot her or I shoot you. That simple. Two, you don’t shoot her. I shoot you then I shoot her. Your world Violet. Make a choice.
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