Reid Barwick

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Reviewer Rating: | Screenplays: 23 | Reviews: 5

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Rapture of Elle Divine - Boardrooms E2 tv series
Genre: Drama,Action/Adventure
Black Angels syndicate meet to discuss new opportunities and threats have arisen in the pandemic. In Chicago, to begin Elle’s trip wire’s another Black Angel and needs to adjust her strategy.
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4 days ago
Checkmate feature
Genre: Drama,Thriller,Mystery/Suspense
When a group of eccentric characters meet at a quiet inn in Vermont, things go missing and lives are lost. Will anyone be able to escape?
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short
Genre: Drama,Family,Comedy
Kaitlynn Dawn Prescott is one week away from a wedding she had in her mind since she was 15. Every thing is set. All that’s left is her fiancé and groomsmen to fly from California, and her step father from Puerto Rico. What could go wrong? It’s Sunday, September 10, 2001.
Reid Barwick uploaded a television screenplay
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Rapture of Elle Divine - Reboot E1 tv series
Genre: Action/Adventure
Elle Divine walks from the midst of the Blue Ridge during a pandemic. She desires Elle Divine to fix things gone wrong over starting with two female disciples
Reid Barwick uploaded a television screenplay
1 week ago
Rapture of Elle Divine - Reboot E1 tv series
Genre: Action/Adventure
Elle Divine walks from the midst of the Blue Ridge during a pandemic. She desires Elle Divine to fix things gone wrong over starting with two female disciples
Reid Barwick completed a review for
2 weeks ago
Plans are Fantasies: Episode 1 - "Pilot" tv series
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense
Review Rating:
Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they recount the events in which Rosh meets his crush, Tracy.

I would strongly suggest the writer look at a few existing classic screenplays, (i.e. Script Slug.) for appropriate scene information set ups. Opening scene has heroic music. Why get louder? The quick music stop and fall is the gag. The opening dialog does seem realistic or natural for two teenage friends who know each other well. Action needs to be succinct without full explanation of why: i.e. A questions is asked by Sal. We know Sal already asked the question. Rosh stops. That's all you need to say. There are many situations similar to this in the script. Are you writing a novel or a screenplay? "Sal looks like he is trying really hard to remember something, but suddenly, his face turns to fear, as if he had remembered a repressed memory. When Rosh sees this, he solemnly nods his head in agreement." That's what you're thinking. If there was an audience, they'd have no idea that's there's ESP going on here. If "someone" is approaching the friends that they don't see, and it's LIRA, tell the script reader you're trying to sell this to that it's LIRA the unseen someone in the scene. You don't have so say LIRA gets interrupted. It should be clear in the dialogue already. Finish your punctuation where it's needed. Stop being preoccupied by cinematic directions. In the end, you not going to be the one making that decision. The garbage can incident doesn't work. Not funny. Makes no sense. Not natural to occur, even between friends. It is too disjointed, and the miracle of miracles that a new character is introduced on the 19th page to get your protagonist close to his objective make no sense.

Reid Barwick just claimed a review for a television script
2 weeks ago
Plans are Fantasies: Episode 1 - "Pilot" tv series
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense
Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they recount the events in which Rosh meets his crush, Tracy.
Reid Barwick just claimed a review for a short script
2 weeks ago
James Bond 007-Long Love Lost short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
Bond has a wild adventure ahead of him with his arch nemesis Blofeld.
Reid Barwick uploaded a television screenplay
2 weeks ago
Cheechako - The Pilot tv series
Genre: Drama,Action/Adventure
Nurse Paula Porter should be happy. Good husband. Her son is soon to graduating. At 35, that’s it? She wants an adventure and discovers finds the new state of Alaska is offering free land to homesteaders. She and events around her husband are about to disrupt their acceptable lives.logline
Reid Barwick uploaded a short screenplay
2 weeks ago
Perfect Wedding short
Genre: Drama,Family,Comedy
Kaitlynn Dawn Prescott is one week away from a wedding she had in her mind since she was 15. Every thing is set. All that’s left is her fiancé and groomsmen to fly from California, and her step father from Puerto Rico. What could go wrong? It’s Sunday, September 10, 2001.

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Draft #2 | Genre: Drama,Family,Comedy
Kaitlynn Dawn Prescott is one week away from a wedding she had in her mind since she was 15. Every thing is set. All that’s left is her fiancé and groomsmen to fly from California, and her step father from Puerto Rico. What could go wrong? It’s Sunday, September 10, 2001.
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4 days ago | reviews | 64 pages
Draft #9 | Genre: Drama,Action/Adventure
Nurse Paula Porter should be happy. Good husband. Her son is soon to graduating. At 35, that’s it? She wants an adventure and discovers finds the new state of Alaska is offering free land to homesteaders. She and events around her husband are about to disrupt their acceptable lives.logline
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5 days ago | reviews | 50 pages
Draft #3 | Genre: Action/Adventure
Elle Divine walks from the midst of the Blue Ridge during a pandemic. She desires Elle Divine to fix things gone wrong over starting with two female disciples
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5 days ago | reviews | 39 pages
Draft #1 | Genre: Action/Adventure
Elle Divine walks from the midst of the Blue Ridge during a pandemic. She desires Elle Divine to fix things gone wrong over starting with two female disciples
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1 week ago | reviews | 39 pages
Draft #1 | Genre: Drama,Action/Adventure
Black Angels syndicate meet to discuss new opportunities and threats have arisen in the pandemic. In Chicago, to begin Elle’s trip wire’s another Black Angel and needs to adjust her strategy.
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2 days ago | reviews | 46 pages
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Reid Barwick

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Reviewer Rating: | Screenplays: 23 | Reviews: 5

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Draft #2 | Genre: Drama,Family,Comedy
Kaitlynn Dawn Prescott is one week away from a wedding she had in her mind since she was 15. Every thing is set. All that’s left is her fiancé and groomsmen to fly from California, and her step father from Puerto Rico. What could go wrong? It’s Sunday, September 10, 2001.
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4 days ago | reviews | 64 pages
Draft #9 | Genre: Drama,Action/Adventure
Nurse Paula Porter should be happy. Good husband. Her son is soon to graduating. At 35, that’s it? She wants an adventure and discovers finds the new state of Alaska is offering free land to homesteaders. She and events around her husband are about to disrupt their acceptable lives.logline
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5 days ago | reviews | 50 pages
Draft #3 | Genre: Action/Adventure
Elle Divine walks from the midst of the Blue Ridge during a pandemic. She desires Elle Divine to fix things gone wrong over starting with two female disciples
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5 days ago | reviews | 39 pages
Draft #1 | Genre: Action/Adventure
Elle Divine walks from the midst of the Blue Ridge during a pandemic. She desires Elle Divine to fix things gone wrong over starting with two female disciples
Rating is only available to members
1 week ago | reviews | 39 pages
Draft #1 | Genre: Drama,Action/Adventure
Black Angels syndicate meet to discuss new opportunities and threats have arisen in the pandemic. In Chicago, to begin Elle’s trip wire’s another Black Angel and needs to adjust her strategy.
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2 days ago | reviews | 46 pages
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1 month ago | 4 reviews | 17 pages
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2 months ago | 3 reviews | 22 pages
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The choice
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Reid Barwick uploaded a television screenplay
2 days ago
Rapture of Elle Divine - Boardrooms E2 tv series
Genre: Drama,Action/Adventure
Black Angels syndicate meet to discuss new opportunities and threats have arisen in the pandemic. In Chicago, to begin Elle’s trip wire’s another Black Angel and needs to adjust her strategy.
Reid Barwick just claimed a review for a feature script
4 days ago
Checkmate feature
Genre: Drama,Thriller,Mystery/Suspense
When a group of eccentric characters meet at a quiet inn in Vermont, things go missing and lives are lost. Will anyone be able to escape?
A review was just purchased for a short script. Claim it here.
1 week ago
short
Genre: Drama,Family,Comedy
Kaitlynn Dawn Prescott is one week away from a wedding she had in her mind since she was 15. Every thing is set. All that’s left is her fiancé and groomsmen to fly from California, and her step father from Puerto Rico. What could go wrong? It’s Sunday, September 10, 2001.
Reid Barwick uploaded a television screenplay
1 week ago
Rapture of Elle Divine - Reboot E1 tv series
Genre: Action/Adventure
Elle Divine walks from the midst of the Blue Ridge during a pandemic. She desires Elle Divine to fix things gone wrong over starting with two female disciples
Reid Barwick uploaded a television screenplay
1 week ago
Rapture of Elle Divine - Reboot E1 tv series
Genre: Action/Adventure
Elle Divine walks from the midst of the Blue Ridge during a pandemic. She desires Elle Divine to fix things gone wrong over starting with two female disciples
Reid Barwick completed a review for
2 weeks ago
Plans are Fantasies: Episode 1 - "Pilot" tv series
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense
Review Rating:
Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they recount the events in which Rosh meets his crush, Tracy.

I would strongly suggest the writer look at a few existing classic screenplays, (i.e. Script Slug.) for appropriate scene information set ups. Opening scene has heroic music. Why get louder? The quick music stop and fall is the gag. The opening dialog does seem realistic or natural for two teenage friends who know each other well. Action needs to be succinct without full explanation of why: i.e. A questions is asked by Sal. We know Sal already asked the question. Rosh stops. That's all you need to say. There are many situations similar to this in the script. Are you writing a novel or a screenplay? "Sal looks like he is trying really hard to remember something, but suddenly, his face turns to fear, as if he had remembered a repressed memory. When Rosh sees this, he solemnly nods his head in agreement." That's what you're thinking. If there was an audience, they'd have no idea that's there's ESP going on here. If "someone" is approaching the friends that they don't see, and it's LIRA, tell the script reader you're trying to sell this to that it's LIRA the unseen someone in the scene. You don't have so say LIRA gets interrupted. It should be clear in the dialogue already. Finish your punctuation where it's needed. Stop being preoccupied by cinematic directions. In the end, you not going to be the one making that decision. The garbage can incident doesn't work. Not funny. Makes no sense. Not natural to occur, even between friends. It is too disjointed, and the miracle of miracles that a new character is introduced on the 19th page to get your protagonist close to his objective make no sense.

Reid Barwick just claimed a review for a television script
2 weeks ago
Plans are Fantasies: Episode 1 - "Pilot" tv series
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense
Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they recount the events in which Rosh meets his crush, Tracy.
Reid Barwick just claimed a review for a short script
2 weeks ago
James Bond 007-Long Love Lost short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
Bond has a wild adventure ahead of him with his arch nemesis Blofeld.
Reid Barwick uploaded a television screenplay
2 weeks ago
Cheechako - The Pilot tv series
Genre: Drama,Action/Adventure
Nurse Paula Porter should be happy. Good husband. Her son is soon to graduating. At 35, that’s it? She wants an adventure and discovers finds the new state of Alaska is offering free land to homesteaders. She and events around her husband are about to disrupt their acceptable lives.logline
Reid Barwick uploaded a short screenplay
2 weeks ago
Perfect Wedding short
Genre: Drama,Family,Comedy
Kaitlynn Dawn Prescott is one week away from a wedding she had in her mind since she was 15. Every thing is set. All that’s left is her fiancé and groomsmen to fly from California, and her step father from Puerto Rico. What could go wrong? It’s Sunday, September 10, 2001.