Chukwuma Amobi

Aspiring Screenwriter

Reviewer Rating:
Screenplays: 9
Reviews: 36
Enjoys:

Short Bio

I finished in Biochemistry from the University of Nigeria in Awka Anambra state Nigeria. I have written other screenplays like: (1) "SO FAR AWAY"(Nollywood's first one man cast film starring Segun Arinze only) (2) "JUST SAY YES"(Produced by PSI multimedia in Lagos Nigeria) (3) "GUTSY GIRL"(Optioned to PSI multimedia in Lagos Nigeria) (4) "OBLIVION"(Written for Ndave productions in Awka Anambra state Nigeria) I love to explore new grounds so hit me up if you need an awesome screenplay written for you. Cheers...

Recent Activity

Chukwuma Amobi just claimed a review for a feature script
1 day ago
Entitled feature
Genre: Thriller
Three people wake up in a room with no doors or windows. They notice a casket at the far side of the room with three locks and a timer counting down. They must figure out why they are there and what happens when the timer reaches zero.
2 weeks ago
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short
Genre: Drama
A man scatters his apartment looking for something important.
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short
Genre: Drama
A man scatters his apartment looking for something important.
Chukwuma Amobi uploaded a short screenplay
1 day ago
Need short
Genre: Drama
A man scatters his apartment looking for something important.
1 day ago
reviews
7 pages
Chukwuma Amobi just claimed a review for a television script
5 days ago
Craft of Five tv series
Genre: Comedy
Five young, starving, artist, roomies trying to ‘make it’ without killing each other in the process.
2 weeks ago
reviews
31 pages
Chukwuma Amobi completed a review for
6 days ago
Bop short
Genre: Comedy
Review Rating: 3
A washed-up boxing trainer finds new hope in an unlikely protege: An inflatable bop clown.

Concept is good but could be made better. The script certainly started well. It hooked me but as it progresses, its shortcomings creeps in and that is just the shortcomings of the writer. The dialogue is good but could be better. The action/description is nice but could be made better. The protagonists are interesting. Bruce and Bop clown are outstanding but a few things are out of place in them. It's a comedy script, I get it. It's something no one thought of, I get it. But keep an open mind on this, why would Bruce decide to train a bop clown for anything? Seeing that it could take a hit is just not enough reason. What happened to it before the preteens started beating it? Does it posses anything special? If so, what is it? Or is Bruce seeing things in his head? This is just food for thought. The climax is good.

1 week ago
4 reviews
16 pages
Chukwuma Amobi just claimed a review for a short script
1 week ago
Bop short
Genre: Comedy
A washed-up boxing trainer finds new hope in an unlikely protege: An inflatable bop clown.
1 week ago
4 reviews
16 pages
Chukwuma Amobi completed a review for
1 week ago
The Bench (working title suggestions welcome) short
Genre: Drama
Review Rating: 2.5
Two Highschool students grapple with the losses they face following an immense tragedy.

Concept is good. The first page of the script is not so good. It made me want to drop it. The action lines are good but could be better. The dialogue... Well, no one wants to read a giant wall of text. Keep it short most of the time. If it has to be long, make it 5 lines. 7 max. The protagonist seems interesting but you didn't show how interesting he is. Think up more ways to do that. The climax is not good.

1 week ago
1 reviews
5 pages
Chukwuma Amobi just claimed a review for a short script
1 week ago
The Bench (working title suggestions welcome) short
Genre: Drama
Two Highschool students grapple with the losses they face following an immense tragedy.
1 week ago
1 reviews
5 pages
A review was just purchased for a short script. Claim it here.
1 week ago
short
Genre: Drama
A dying woman begs her competition to put her out of her misery.

Screenplays

Draft #3 | Genre: Drama
A transgender makes a suicide video after going through sexual and emotional abuse.
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2 weeks ago | 2 reviews | 25 pages

The New Oil
Feature

Draft #1 | Genre: Action/Adventure
After posing as a pro reporter to receive information, a young asthmatic African American must escape annihilation and run the story to expose the corrupt policy of European business consortium in Africa.
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2 months ago | 1 reviews | 98 pages
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Kill Me
Short

Draft #2 | Genre: Drama
A dying woman begs her competition to put her out of her misery.
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13 hours ago | reviews | 8 pages

Need
Short

Draft #1 | Genre: Drama
A man scatters his apartment looking for something important.
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1 day ago | reviews | 7 pages
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Reviews

Lily
Short

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4 months ago | 3 reviews | 8 pages
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4 months ago | 1 reviews | 17 pages

Gravekeeper
TV Series

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4 months ago | 1 reviews | 34 pages
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3 months ago | 2 reviews | 110 pages

The Hobo
TV Series

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3 months ago | 2 reviews | 25 pages

Southside
Feature

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3 months ago | 2 reviews | 100 pages

The Hobo (Draft 2)
TV Series

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3 months ago | 5 reviews | 25 pages

Mister
Short

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3 months ago | 9 reviews | 2 pages

Southside
Feature

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2 months ago | 4 reviews | 97 pages

Change will come
TV Series

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2 months ago | 2 reviews | 43 pages
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2 months ago | 3 reviews | 17 pages

Jé Rouge
Short

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4 months ago | 8 reviews | 7 pages
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2 months ago | 1 reviews | 4 pages

Lily
Short

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4 months ago | 2 reviews | 11 pages
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3 months ago | 1 reviews | 103 pages

The Return
Feature

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5 months ago | 2 reviews | 90 pages
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1 month ago | 1 reviews | 44 pages

Misty River
TV Series

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2 months ago | 1 reviews | 47 pages
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1 month ago | 3 reviews | 36 pages

The homies
Short

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7 months ago | 5 reviews | 10 pages

77 lives
Short

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5 months ago | 5 reviews | 24 pages
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7 months ago | 5 reviews | 10 pages

Pine
Short

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3 months ago | 2 reviews | 15 pages

BÊTE NOIRE
Short

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3 months ago | 1 reviews | 16 pages

Little Alien
Short

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7 months ago | 1 reviews | 58 pages

SUNRISE
Short

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2 months ago | 1 reviews | 13 pages
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5 months ago | 2 reviews | 34 pages

Villain
Feature

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7 months ago | 3 reviews | 110 pages

PAURA
Short

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4 months ago | 9 reviews | 3 pages

Bound by Blood
Feature

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4 months ago | 1 reviews | 114 pages
Genre: Thriller
A boy is afraid to grow up.
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2 weeks ago | 2 reviews | 7 pages

Tee Party
Short

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2 months ago | 1 reviews | 11 pages
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1 week ago | 1 reviews | 5 pages

Bop
Short

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1 week ago | 4 reviews | 16 pages
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Chukwuma Amobi

Aspiring Screenwriter

Reviewer Rating:
Screenplays: 9
Reviews: 36
Enjoys:

Short Bio

I finished in Biochemistry from the University of Nigeria in Awka Anambra state Nigeria. I have written other screenplays like: (1) "SO FAR AWAY"(Nollywood's first one man cast film starring Segun Arinze only) (2) "JUST SAY YES"(Produced by PSI multimedia in Lagos Nigeria) (3) "GUTSY GIRL"(Optioned to PSI multimedia in Lagos Nigeria) (4) "OBLIVION"(Written for Ndave productions in Awka Anambra state Nigeria) I love to explore new grounds so hit me up if you need an awesome screenplay written for you. Cheers...

Screenplays

Draft #3 | Genre: Drama
A transgender makes a suicide video after going through sexual and emotional abuse.
Rating is only available to members
2 weeks ago | 2 reviews | 25 pages

The New Oil
Feature

Draft #1 | Genre: Action/Adventure
After posing as a pro reporter to receive information, a young asthmatic African American must escape annihilation and run the story to expose the corrupt policy of European business consortium in Africa.
Rating is only available to members
2 months ago | 1 reviews | 98 pages
SHOW MORE
Draft #3 | Genre: Drama
A transgender makes a suicide video after going through sexual and emotional abuse.
Rating is only available to members
2 weeks ago | 2 reviews | 25 pages

The New Oil
Feature

Draft #1 | Genre: Action/Adventure
After posing as a pro reporter to receive information, a young asthmatic African American must escape annihilation and run the story to expose the corrupt policy of European business consortium in Africa.
Rating is only available to members
2 months ago | 1 reviews | 98 pages
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Reviews

Lily
Short

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4 months ago | 3 reviews | 8 pages
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Lily
Short

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4 months ago | 3 reviews | 8 pages
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Recent Activity

Chukwuma Amobi just claimed a review for a feature script
1 day ago
Entitled feature
Genre: Thriller
Three people wake up in a room with no doors or windows. They notice a casket at the far side of the room with three locks and a timer counting down. They must figure out why they are there and what happens when the timer reaches zero.
2 weeks ago
reviews
78 pages
A review was just purchased for a short script. Claim it here.
1 day ago
short
Genre: Drama
A man scatters his apartment looking for something important.
A review was just purchased for a short script. Claim it here.
1 day ago
short
Genre: Drama
A man scatters his apartment looking for something important.
Chukwuma Amobi uploaded a short screenplay
1 day ago
Need short
Genre: Drama
A man scatters his apartment looking for something important.
1 day ago
reviews
7 pages
Chukwuma Amobi just claimed a review for a television script
5 days ago
Craft of Five tv series
Genre: Comedy
Five young, starving, artist, roomies trying to ‘make it’ without killing each other in the process.
2 weeks ago
reviews
31 pages
Chukwuma Amobi completed a review for
6 days ago
Bop short
Genre: Comedy
Review Rating: 3
A washed-up boxing trainer finds new hope in an unlikely protege: An inflatable bop clown.

Concept is good but could be made better. The script certainly started well. It hooked me but as it progresses, its shortcomings creeps in and that is just the shortcomings of the writer. The dialogue is good but could be better. The action/description is nice but could be made better. The protagonists are interesting. Bruce and Bop clown are outstanding but a few things are out of place in them. It's a comedy script, I get it. It's something no one thought of, I get it. But keep an open mind on this, why would Bruce decide to train a bop clown for anything? Seeing that it could take a hit is just not enough reason. What happened to it before the preteens started beating it? Does it posses anything special? If so, what is it? Or is Bruce seeing things in his head? This is just food for thought. The climax is good.

1 week ago
4 reviews
16 pages
Chukwuma Amobi just claimed a review for a short script
1 week ago
Bop short
Genre: Comedy
A washed-up boxing trainer finds new hope in an unlikely protege: An inflatable bop clown.
1 week ago
4 reviews
16 pages
Chukwuma Amobi completed a review for
1 week ago
The Bench (working title suggestions welcome) short
Genre: Drama
Review Rating: 2.5
Two Highschool students grapple with the losses they face following an immense tragedy.

Concept is good. The first page of the script is not so good. It made me want to drop it. The action lines are good but could be better. The dialogue... Well, no one wants to read a giant wall of text. Keep it short most of the time. If it has to be long, make it 5 lines. 7 max. The protagonist seems interesting but you didn't show how interesting he is. Think up more ways to do that. The climax is not good.

1 week ago
1 reviews
5 pages
Chukwuma Amobi just claimed a review for a short script
1 week ago
The Bench (working title suggestions welcome) short
Genre: Drama
Two Highschool students grapple with the losses they face following an immense tragedy.
1 week ago
1 reviews
5 pages
A review was just purchased for a short script. Claim it here.
1 week ago
short
Genre: Drama
A dying woman begs her competition to put her out of her misery.