Tyke Spaide

Aspiring Screenwriter

Reviewer Rating:
Screenplays: 2
Reviews: 3
Enjoys:

Short Bio

I am developing a teen drama called "Misty River". A show loosely based off my life. It combines my love of teen dramas with the action of a shounen anime. Given the volatile atmosphere today's teens are but in due to bullying. My hope is that "Misty River" can show how one might deal with bullying and not let their oppressor bring them down.

Recent Activity

Tyke Spaide completed a review for
3 months ago
Postman's Etiquette short
Genre: Mystery/Suspense
Review Rating:
A postman gets requited as a state agent because he has a time travel ability

The concept is differently original. Although I would categorize it under Sci-Fi and a Rom Com, not Suspense and Mystery. The log line stays true for the overall concept of the piece. The pacing of some scenes were really fast it's like they're driving romantically all the sudden her head's in his crotch or they're staring out the window now they're in bed. I really disliked the whole concept of Aksel, he had this amazing ability and I was all for him using it to spy on the government, but as soon as it turned into trying to impress Trine and focused on that I turned into a Rom Com. If you took the path of he becomes a spy and that Trine was sent from the government to neutralize him and at the end she like drugs him or something like that that would be more appealing. But just having her be seduced by one of the agents who hired him just to make him happy just cheapens her character. I mean she already knew how to shoot a gun so the bricks are there to make her an assassin. I'm assuming he going to try to woo her again at the end, although he knows she was basically lying to him says a lot about the type of girl she is and to me it didn't make sense for him to want to pursue her again.

3 months ago
3 reviews
36 pages
Tyke Spaide completed a review for
3 months ago
Identity crisis short
Genre: Drama
Review Rating:
After losing the only love of her life, a transgender loses all hope of finding love again and kills herself.

I really loved Victoria character. Being part of the LGBTQ community myself a lot of the fears she had and the hesitation about loving and letting someone get close to you resonated with me. I'm sure there are plenty of people regardless of sexual orientation or gender identity will connect with her.

5 months ago
5 reviews
23 pages
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3 months ago
tv series
Genre: Drama
Get ready, to jump into the exciting life of 15 year old River Lincoln. Starting out at a new high school can be hard enough but when bumping into the school's bully on the the first day, River's life becomes extremely tempestuous. Will he be able to survive at his new school?
Tyke Spaide completed a review for
4 months ago
PAURA short
Genre: Horror
Review Rating:
A couple spends a night in a film theater. But as the night deepens, things become nightmarish and surreal.

For a short I think it would be visually appealing. The descriptions of the angel getting tortured and Diane pain were written very well. Although the whole concept was lost on me. I never once understood David's motive, why Did he go see this movie, what did it have to do with Diane and the baby. There were a lot of questions and no answers. If that was what you were going for then I say it was a success. The writing was good, just confused on the whole story. Although I liked that you use the Italian word for "Fear" for your title.

6 months ago
10 reviews
3 pages
Tyke Spaide uploaded a television screenplay
4 months ago
Misty River tv series
Genre: Drama
Get ready, to jump into the exciting life of 15 year old River Lincoln. Starting out at a new high school can be hard enough but when bumping into the school's bully on the the first day, River's life becomes extremely tempestuous. Will he be able to survive at his new school?
4 months ago
1 reviews
47 pages
Tyke Spaide uploaded a television screenplay
4 months ago
Misty River tv series
Genre: Drama
Get ready, to jump into the exciting life of 15 year old River Lincoln. Starting out at a new high school can be hard enough but when bumping into the school's bully on the the first day, River's life becomes extremely tempestuous. Will he be able to survive at his new school?
4 months ago
reviews
47 pages
Tyke Spaide just joined ScriptMother!
4 months ago

Screenplays

Misty River
TV Series

Draft #1 | Genre: Drama
Get ready, to jump into the exciting life of 15 year old River Lincoln. Starting out at a new high school can be hard enough but when bumping into the school's bully on the the first day, River's life becomes extremely tempestuous. Will he be able to survive at his new school?
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4 months ago | 1 reviews | 47 pages
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Reviews

PAURA
Short

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6 months ago | 10 reviews | 3 pages
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5 months ago | 5 reviews | 23 pages
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Genre: Mystery/Suspense
Time Traveler uses gift to impress girl
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3 months ago | 3 reviews | 36 pages
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Tyke Spaide

Aspiring Screenwriter

Reviewer Rating:
Screenplays: 2
Reviews: 3
Enjoys:

Short Bio

I am developing a teen drama called "Misty River". A show loosely based off my life. It combines my love of teen dramas with the action of a shounen anime. Given the volatile atmosphere today's teens are but in due to bullying. My hope is that "Misty River" can show how one might deal with bullying and not let their oppressor bring them down.

Screenplays

Misty River
TV Series

Draft #1 | Genre: Drama
Get ready, to jump into the exciting life of 15 year old River Lincoln. Starting out at a new high school can be hard enough but when bumping into the school's bully on the the first day, River's life becomes extremely tempestuous. Will he be able to survive at his new school?
Rating is only available to members
4 months ago | 1 reviews | 47 pages
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Misty River
TV Series

Draft #1 | Genre: Drama
Get ready, to jump into the exciting life of 15 year old River Lincoln. Starting out at a new high school can be hard enough but when bumping into the school's bully on the the first day, River's life becomes extremely tempestuous. Will he be able to survive at his new school?
Rating is only available to members
4 months ago | reviews | 47 pages

Misty River
TV Series

Draft #1 | Genre: Drama
Get ready, to jump into the exciting life of 15 year old River Lincoln. Starting out at a new high school can be hard enough but when bumping into the school's bully on the the first day, River's life becomes extremely tempestuous. Will he be able to survive at his new school?
Rating is only available to members
4 months ago | 1 reviews | 47 pages
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Reviews

PAURA
Short

Rating is only available to members
6 months ago | 10 reviews | 3 pages
Rating is only available to members
5 months ago | 5 reviews | 23 pages
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PAURA
Short

Rating is only available to members
6 months ago | 10 reviews | 3 pages
Rating is only available to members
5 months ago | 5 reviews | 23 pages
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Recent Activity

Tyke Spaide completed a review for
3 months ago
Postman's Etiquette short
Genre: Mystery/Suspense
Review Rating:
A postman gets requited as a state agent because he has a time travel ability

The concept is differently original. Although I would categorize it under Sci-Fi and a Rom Com, not Suspense and Mystery. The log line stays true for the overall concept of the piece. The pacing of some scenes were really fast it's like they're driving romantically all the sudden her head's in his crotch or they're staring out the window now they're in bed. I really disliked the whole concept of Aksel, he had this amazing ability and I was all for him using it to spy on the government, but as soon as it turned into trying to impress Trine and focused on that I turned into a Rom Com. If you took the path of he becomes a spy and that Trine was sent from the government to neutralize him and at the end she like drugs him or something like that that would be more appealing. But just having her be seduced by one of the agents who hired him just to make him happy just cheapens her character. I mean she already knew how to shoot a gun so the bricks are there to make her an assassin. I'm assuming he going to try to woo her again at the end, although he knows she was basically lying to him says a lot about the type of girl she is and to me it didn't make sense for him to want to pursue her again.

3 months ago
3 reviews
36 pages
Tyke Spaide completed a review for
3 months ago
Identity crisis short
Genre: Drama
Review Rating:
After losing the only love of her life, a transgender loses all hope of finding love again and kills herself.

I really loved Victoria character. Being part of the LGBTQ community myself a lot of the fears she had and the hesitation about loving and letting someone get close to you resonated with me. I'm sure there are plenty of people regardless of sexual orientation or gender identity will connect with her.

5 months ago
5 reviews
23 pages
A review was just purchased for a television script. Claim it here.
3 months ago
tv series
Genre: Drama
Get ready, to jump into the exciting life of 15 year old River Lincoln. Starting out at a new high school can be hard enough but when bumping into the school's bully on the the first day, River's life becomes extremely tempestuous. Will he be able to survive at his new school?
Tyke Spaide completed a review for
4 months ago
PAURA short
Genre: Horror
Review Rating:
A couple spends a night in a film theater. But as the night deepens, things become nightmarish and surreal.

For a short I think it would be visually appealing. The descriptions of the angel getting tortured and Diane pain were written very well. Although the whole concept was lost on me. I never once understood David's motive, why Did he go see this movie, what did it have to do with Diane and the baby. There were a lot of questions and no answers. If that was what you were going for then I say it was a success. The writing was good, just confused on the whole story. Although I liked that you use the Italian word for "Fear" for your title.

6 months ago
10 reviews
3 pages
Tyke Spaide uploaded a television screenplay
4 months ago
Misty River tv series
Genre: Drama
Get ready, to jump into the exciting life of 15 year old River Lincoln. Starting out at a new high school can be hard enough but when bumping into the school's bully on the the first day, River's life becomes extremely tempestuous. Will he be able to survive at his new school?
4 months ago
1 reviews
47 pages
Tyke Spaide uploaded a television screenplay
4 months ago
Misty River tv series
Genre: Drama
Get ready, to jump into the exciting life of 15 year old River Lincoln. Starting out at a new high school can be hard enough but when bumping into the school's bully on the the first day, River's life becomes extremely tempestuous. Will he be able to survive at his new school?
4 months ago
reviews
47 pages
Tyke Spaide just joined ScriptMother!
4 months ago