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Here were my thoughts while reading through this script: 1. Concept - I definitely like the idea of the whole framed for a crime he didn't commit even though it's been done many times before. I personally love the fact that it revolved around the movie industry and actors. 2. Story - The story was great. There were several moments that I wasn't expecting, in a good way nonetheless. However, this is a bit of a nitpick, but I personally thought that the climax was a bit lackluster, but I do like that you kinda set it up for a sequel! 3. Structure - The entire script is formatted damn near perfectly. The whole script was a breeze reading through and not once did I find myself lost or confused. Fantastic job! 4. Character Development - This is probably the one script I've read where I genuinely liked EVERY character written. Everyone played out in their own voices and personalities in my head and I loved it. This is definitely the strongest point in your script. 5. Dialogue - The only reason I really have this marked as "Good" rather than "Excellent" is that there are a few dialogue sequences that drag a bit with no breaks. Other than that, the dialogue was very realistic and believable and I greatly enjoyed it. 6. Conclusion - This script was such a blast to read through and I would totally re-read it over again. Aside from the prolonged dialogue sequences and the ending, this script was excellent!
After getting fed up with evil winning in the end of horror movies, a man decides to take matters into his own hands.
Carrie's week is going miserably and camp doesn't seem to help. Neither does the fact that there's a killer loose on the campgrounds hellbent on being remembered by his childhood bullies.
After dying in a car accident, Johnny Seth is about to face judgment, that is until Satan gets God's permission to bring Johnny back to life, only for his plan to go south.
The torment was too much for him to handle, and now he's gonna make sure everyone has a jolly good time!