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WHATEVER IT TAKES by Kathleen Hof

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This is a good start on your short. There's some clean-up items you'll need to take care of as a starting point.

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Genre: Comedy

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Please see my script notes - that's where you'll find a lot of the specific comments. The below are some of the biggest items that need to be addressed: 1) Clean up the grammar 2) Clean up the script formatting 3) Focus on building a 3-act or 5-act structure (see Save the Cat website for a guide) 4) Make the characters more dynamic - make the audience more interested in their journey 5) You'll need more scene description 6) Please see my other script notes for more detailed comments

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After a fight with an overbearing customer ends with an accident, a bumbling carpet layer makes the situation worse when he ineptly tries to destroy the life-size evidence hidden in his rolled-up rug.

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