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Star Wars Episode 2 The Force’s Reckoning feature
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Thriller,Action/Adventure
Lord Malcolm continues to capture Jedi from across the galaxy which causes Master Oscar and his Padawan Connor to go into hiding on the Planet Soiven. Meanwhile Master Marc Kena and his Padawan Chelsea Wilson search for the ancient Jedi and Sith scriptures before the Empire finds them
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37 minutes ago
8 Bits feature
Genre: Drama,Comedy
Review Rating:

First off the writing is just amazing. The text flows well and the dialogue never feels bloated or unnatural. The writer has skills to write any kind of story when it comes to structure and flow. This story is a difficult one to write since it doesn't have a traditional protagonist or antagonist. There are several characters, but the writer manages it well. All characters got unique personality and their own way of speaking. It's shown rather than told as well, there is no annoying exposition or passive characters. So what could be better? First off I did not find all characters interesting. Even with their deadly sin traits, they were not always very extreme. What did they actually get done in their scenes? I think some characters could use of a better subplot, or show their traits in a more extreme situation. Another issue with this nontraditional story is that there's no real goal. As a reader, I do not know what to pay attention to. Often this is saved by witty and well-written dialogue, but some sort of common goal would make it easier to read. A minor detail is that there could be a lot of scene shifts. Perhaps using sub-scenes would give it a better flow, or skipping some of the shorter scenes. The flashback scene with the parent's photo was hard to follow and too long. I would try to either not have it as a flashback or make it shorter. Summary: An extremely well-written story, the writer has the potential to write anything. Too many characters without any clear goal, the story would be more interesting if more important things happened to them.

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Genre: Drama,Comedy,Family
Welcome to Tidal High, where drama is always happing. Follow along with Jacob, Mason, Holly and Ruby as they navigate their way through high school with their teacher Courtney Garcia.
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Genre: Drama,Comedy,Family
Welcome to Tidal High, where drama is always happing. Follow along with Jacob, Mason, Holly and Ruby as they navigate their way through high school with their teacher Courtney Garcia.
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tv series
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense
Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they realize how struggles and setbacks can fuel a lot of change, even in the span of a few months.
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Genre: Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
Bond has a wild adventure ahead of him with his arch nemesis Blofeld.
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Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.
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Plans are Fantasies: Episode 1 - "Pilot" tv series
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense
Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they realize how struggles and setbacks can fuel a lot of change, even in the span of a few months.
ethan hunt uploaded a short screenplay
1 day ago
LoopHole short
Genre: Comedy,Mystery/Suspense
Someone chases protagnist,but doesn't know why.
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8 Bits feature
Genre: Drama,Comedy
What you seek might be in front of you the whole time!
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mike harper uploaded a feature screenplay
3 days ago
Mage's Price feature
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Action/Adventure
Everything has a cost. But the cost of magic is different. Magic breaks the laws of the real world. Jesse is soon to find out the mage's price.
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Genre: Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense
Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they realize how struggles and setbacks can fuel a lot of change, even in the span of a few months.
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Plans are Fantasies: Episode 1 - "Pilot" tv series
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Mystery/Suspense
Plans and fantasies have one thing in common, they aren’t going to happen exactly as you planned. Rosh and Sal collectively learn this as they realize how struggles and setbacks can fuel a lot of change, even in the span of a few months.
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When The Bell Jangles short
Genre: Thriller,Horror,Drama
A woman running away from an abusive relationship holds a secret but so does the hotel she finds herself in.

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A retro 80's style, home-invasion slasher about an unhinged waitress who stalks and torments a man and his family after not being tipped. But this isn't just any ordinary family.... Don't Breathe meets You're Next.

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Corrupted sheriffs steal gold from the Union to fund subversive legions intent on overthrowing the government. A renegade cowboy double crosses them for the gold as supernatural occurrences threaten all involved.

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Carrie's week is going miserably and camp doesn't seem to help. Neither does the fact that there's a killer loose on the campgrounds hellbent on being remembered by his childhood bullies.

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A socially-awkward hockey player is forced to relive the day of his championship game over and over again until he wins.

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