by Jimmy Sanders
36 pages
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The writer shows great promise. The story moved along at a brisk pace and didn't overstay its welcome. The concept delivered on the goods advertised and the characters were very well described. The dialogue was exceptional and fun to read. The spelling and grammar were excellent.
Entertaining and action packed with a dose of dark absurd humor. This story would be perfect for a comic book series, graphic novel, or even animated film. The writer has a great way of describing action. I would recommend this story to anyone who likes a good, twisted tale of righteous ass-kicking. Oh, and bring a mop. You're gonna need it for all the blood.
Overall, Vox Populi is a hard pass. It is a wholly unsatisfying screenplay with little to offer the reader in terms of an engaging narrative, compelling characters, or even action set pieces. I'm unsure of how it can still be this poor since we're supposedly on the 43rd draft, but that's a question for another time...