This is the first draft to my first screenplay and I would like unbiased criticism to judge how much more I need to touch it up and add, thank you.
John has been surviving on his own ever since an outbreak of chronic wasting disease killed most of the people around him. He has lived with a "kill or be killed" mindset until he helps a woman with a child get away from a cruel dictator. Now this dictator and his army hunt them throughout the city as they struggle to survive.
Told from 4 perspectives, 4 people travel to appear on a reality show to address their symptoms from the “Nightlight” tablet, a drug that cures insomnia, only to discover a devastating truth about themselves and the scientific trials conducted on them, that will turn their world upside down.
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