1. Concept - I liked what you went with for the concept. Having a troubled son and his wife try to follow in the footsteps of his father in the hitman business. I thought that was great!
2. Story - The story started out fairly good in the first act. However, a bit into the second act, it starts going in multiple directions that are a bit hard to follow along with. I think if it was tied together more wi...
When a backbiter street kid from Mumbai meets a sarcastic British man in a cafe, memories from his past resurface and he is forced to question his new lifestyle.
A now high school graduate wants to make something of himself in the world and it's going to take more than his small group of friends to get the support he needs.
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