Start: good, easy to follow up - clear idea of the role of the main character, her position in society.
Script structure: great to follow, plot twist with good ending. Make sure you stick with the script structure, sometimes it is a little too narrative. You should only write what we see/hear - not the characters thoughts. 'Our heroine' no need to put that. ' 'Surpassingly she is more calm' - > no need to say 'surprisingly'
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A college student is forced to take 8:00 AM classes for the first time in his life. He soon learns, however, that the consequences of sleep deprivation are far more serious than he could have ever imagined.
After an alcohol fueled night, a man wakes up to discover he has been kidnapped into a modern day Gladiator ring, and must fight in order to stay alive.
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