Sticks and Stones feature
#Crime #Drama #Romance
By
Alice
Bridge
One mans journey through abuse. Running from his past towards an even darker future.
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Summary
1 Reviews |
74 pages |
2 years ago
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Draft 1
When Eduardo's chance encounter with a stranger develops into a passionate romance, a toxic cycle of control and violence begins to engulf his world. Fighting his past and what it is to be a man.
Industry Reviews
Overall, I think the non-linear story is effective. It definitely feels like an essential part of how you tell the story. There's definitely a lot of emotion in the story, and the toxic relationship mixed with the non-linear story adds a dynamic all on its own. The fights between Eduardo and Delilah get a big repetitive and redundant at times, but I feel like maybe you can consolidate these in a way, with more memorable fights during key moments,...
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