When Eduardo's chance encounter with a stranger develops into a passionate romance, a toxic cycle of control and violence begins to engulf his world. Fighting his past and what it is to be a man.
Overall, I think the non-linear story is effective. It definitely feels like an essential part of how you tell the story. There's definitely a lot of emotion in the story, and the toxic relationship mixed with the non-linear story adds a dynamic all on its own. The fights between Eduardo and Delilah get a big repetitive and redundant at times, but I feel like maybe you can consolidate these in a way, with more memorable fights during key moments,...
When a test pilot is chosen by an ancient force to protect the universe, he’s thrown into a war. As he struggles to find his place among aliens and god-like beings-- such as the Guardians of the Universe-- he’s forced to confront the weight of legacy, loyalty, and leadership.
From the back seat of police cruiser, a father sees his daughter taken out of the back of his car by, Ed, a man he knows from her school. The father must decide if she is better off with him or in the "system" like him. Ed must learn that raising a child isn't about finding personal redemption.
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