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By Brijesh Suthar

Death is inevitable everything in between is just our perception

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1 Reviews | 11 pages | 3 years ago | Draft 1
##drama ##psychological ##dark ##complex
A lower class boy with inferiority complex how comes face to face with life .

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The story of a young man who feels deflated by the people supposedly better off than himself is common and OK. The way this is written is so poor it should have never passed the first 15.

When speaking characters are first introduced, their name is in all caps. So, it should be BOY. Since you couldn't even give him a name, it should always be Boy not boy.

The way your opening VO is written, its over a blank screen?

Your English is okay...
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