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#Comedy

By chris agnew

Fired and on the verge of homelessness, a wildly optimistic zoomer and his boomer best friend stumble onto a high paying craigslist job that will save them if they can convince a lonely man that life is worth living.

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1 Reviews | 32 pages | 2 years ago | Draft 1
#comedy #adventure #New York #Fun
Pinky and the Brain meets Dumb and Dumber. Two hyper optimists try to make their dreams come true. They'll be lucky if they make rent this month.

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Good story, fun characters, enjoyable events, but needs stronger connection.
Overall this is a good script. The idea is funny, creative, and lighthearted. To me, it feels like I just embarked on these adventures along with Chris and Dave. However, I feel as though it needs more connection when it comes to all of the scene shifts and whatnot. Try to make it easier for the audience to understand how each scene leads into the next. Along with that, when it comes to your sluglines you can use "continuous" instead of "day" to...
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