Fired and on the verge of homelessness, a wildly optimistic zoomer and his boomer best friend stumble onto a high paying craigslist job that will save them if they can convince a lonely man that life is worth living.
Overall this is a good script. The idea is funny, creative, and lighthearted. To me, it feels like I just embarked on these adventures along with Chris and Dave. However, I feel as though it needs more connection when it comes to all of the scene shifts and whatnot. Try to make it easier for the audience to understand how each scene leads into the next. Along with that, when it comes to your sluglines you can use "continuous" instead of "day" to...
An emergency blood transfusion from her cousin Bruce Banner transformed ordinary attorney Jennifer Walters into the extraordinary She-Hulk, who gains celebrity superhero status and an awareness that she’s a character on a television show.
As the new legal guardian for his autistic little brother, a young caddie begins his job at a swanky Miami golf club – serving its quirky members alongside his best friend.
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