This is the first draft to my first screenplay and I would like unbiased criticism to judge how much more I need to touch it up and add, thank you.
John has been surviving on his own ever since an outbreak of chronic wasting disease killed most of the people around him. He has lived with a "kill or be killed" mindset until he helps a woman with a child get away from a cruel dictator. Now this dictator and his army hunt them throughout the city as they struggle to survive.
Popular Alaskan paranormal investigations team answers a call to look into a remote haunting at the home of an old woman, but the house holds terrible secrets that even their historian and medium couldn't predict.
A young woman returns to her childhood cabin to solve the mysterious disappearance of her UFO obsessed father and soon finds herself working under her father's abusive former partner.
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