Fired and on the verge of homelessness, a wildly optimistic zoomer and his boomer best friend stumble onto a high paying craigslist job that will save them if they can convince a lonely man that life is worth living.
Overall this is a good script. The idea is funny, creative, and lighthearted. To me, it feels like I just embarked on these adventures along with Chris and Dave. However, I feel as though it needs more connection when it comes to all of the scene shifts and whatnot. Try to make it easier for the audience to understand how each scene leads into the next. Along with that, when it comes to your sluglines you can use "continuous" instead of "day" to...
The unravelling of a rental scam set by two inexperienced con-men when one of them falls in love with one of their tenants who knows them and has been plotting her revenge against them the moment she figured them out.
Adrian Skye must manage his overbearing Casting Associates, oddball Interns, and impossible actors during the unusual casting of a new film, “Deutschemarks für Dick.”
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