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A misguided millennial seeking revenge for a stolen phone finds the thief being buried in the woods.

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1 Reviews | 5 pages | 4 years ago | Draft 2
Using an app to find his stolen phone, A young man looking for payback gets more than he bargained for.

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I'll just go over my thoughts in chronological order as I read your script. (I enjoyed it by the way)

1ST PAGE

- Good character intro and description, immediately paints a clear first impression of who Darius is
- Intriguing situation to start off in, following a trail, searching for a phone… (his own maybe ?)
- (OS), Offscreen or over the shoulder? It’s just a detail but the formatting is wrong, not very clear
- The segment where Darius...

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