Concept is not good. Plot is good. The characters are real. The dialogue is a thumbs up. The action seems real enough but would have been better if there is conflict.
Climax is good.
**THIS WAS WRITTEN FOR A CONTEST UNDER A STRICT 2-PAGE REQUIREMENT, PLEASE DO NOT PROVIDE FEEDBACK REGARDING LENGTH** A woman comes to terms with her old flame's bride-to-be at his wedding.
Get up-to-date in industry knowledge, Scripts of the Month and more. By subscribing to our newsletter, you'll never miss the best stuff we have to offer.