Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
An army Lieutenant resigns her commission to become a professional poker player, believing poker is safer than army combat, so she thought, until winning a huge amount from a psycho who seeks deadly revenge.
An escort is hired to impersonate a renowned surgeon’s ex-wife to help him rebuild his family, but the deeper she settles into the role, the more she feels trapped inside a life that isn’t hers.
When a strange seductress moves to a historic villa, an esteemed gentleman must set his decorum aside to stop the curse devouring all the men of Birmingham
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