Good Day, I hope this finds you well. Normally I do my reviews in a specific order but this one is different so I shall review in the same order as I read your Script. I hope none of my critiques are too harsh and all will help yourself and your script in the future. BLUR: Starting with reversed domestic violence is a very intriguing hook, well done. Pg. 6- 'shocks'- 'shakes'?- 'shocking'? Pg. 8- Jade is an interesting Character I think you can d...
After the untimely death of her parents, an avid partier, Lana, must take over as the head of the family and, more importantly, become the CEO of her family's multimillion-pound business. It's hard to be a woman with power, it's harder to keep it.
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