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By Nikolay Romanov

After facing the brutal violence of this world, a man survives to live.

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1 Reviews | 6 pages | 1 year ago | Draft 2

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A confusing and undeveloped script with a potentially promising hook

Overall, this reads as a vague idea rather than a script. You need to delineate what is going on, especially since this story seems to be set in a fantasy/sci-fi world (a world that requires building and explanation). You also need to give your characters a backstory. What motivates them? Why do they do what they do? Show this in their dialogue.

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