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Tomis, possibly the most delusional and worst basketball player of all time, tackles a series of obstacles to tryout for a local rec league team.

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1 Reviews | 20 pages | 3 years ago | Draft 1

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Tomis, possibly the most delusional and worst basketball player of all time, tackles a series of obstacles to tryout for a local rec league team.

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There's some promise here, but a lot of work is needed in the execution.

A cute idea for an episode, but more development is going to be needed if Tomis' is going to have a second episode.

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