I think I’ve already spoken all my thoughts story is solid but the formatting of the screenplay ruins everything. If you want to keep your descriptions write a novel instead.
An immature restaurant worker is recruited by a local Detroit fast food to run armchain s for the Israeli Militia in Iraq and Kuwait. He is persued by a lofty interpol agent who is seeking some evidence against the Mexican cartel in his jurisdiction.
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