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Winner Draft #1
Summary
2 Reviews |
120 pages |
6 years ago
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Draft 1
When a corporate climber lies about her affiliation to a secret society in order to get her dream job she has no idea the nightmare she is about to embark upon.
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- Is the Concept strong/original?
The concept is strong and pretty original.
- Does the logline/first ten pages draw the reader?
It does, but it's honestly not that interesting which doesn't live up to the quality of the script itself.
- Are scenes well-written?
They are, but there were some random inconsistencies that pulled me away from the script. Some of the descriptions are a bit unnecessary but besides that, the scenes were seamles...
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