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26 pages |
2 years ago
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Draft 1
After a deal gone wrong with a mobster and the cartel, the mobster hires a hitman to retrieve the stolen cash and kill anyone who stands in his way. However, with the cartel hot on his tail, he must make it back before he can be safe.
(DISCLAIMER: this is one of my very first scripts and it isn't finished so it probably isn't that good).
(DISCLAIMER: this is one of my very first scripts and it isn't finished so it probably isn't that good).
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For being an incomplete script, this was actually a fun read. I'm hoping this will be completed someday and hopefully my feedback will help you with how to write it out. Good luck!
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