I know this is supposed to be for a mini-outline but I really would like another pair of eyes to look over this to see if I'm on the right track. I'm kind of sick of looking at this draft at the moment.
I liked this quite a bit. It's a lot better than most of the scripts I've read on here. I still stand that this should be much longer and have a bigger story and the flesh the characters out more. But other than that, good job.
A career criminal wakes up to find his wife murdered in their bed and their daughter missing. He must put the pieces together to find who committed the horrendous acts and exact revenge.
The travels of a lone bounty Hunter in the dead winter of Mississippi, far from civilised land, hunts down his old slave overseer in the search for answers.
A young cop goes undercover at a local high school to investigate a deadly new drug and quickly finds himself involved with a gang run by a former classmate.
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