The Addicted Writer feature

So, the script is listed as a comedy, the problem is that it isn’t funny. It has a compelling concept but the pros really end there. So what I most recommend you work on is telling an actually effective story with believable and emotionally compelling characters before adding in a bunch of jokes. Aside from that, you have a few formatting and spelling mistakes all over the place which is also why I recommend reading your script over and out loud....