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A lost and confused woman finds herself stranded on an unknown island with no memories to back her up on how she got here. The only evidence holding her up is the map she washed ashore with and the very intriguing residences that inhibit the island.

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1 Reviews | 11 pages | 4 years ago | Draft 1
It's an odd thing to be stranded on an island with no memory of how you got there or who you even are. Even more so, the only people on this island seem to only refer to themselves by numbers. Gaia, the name that the inhabitants soon give the stranded lady, seeks out her reason for being here with only the damaged map that washed to shore with her.

I have ambitions to create this into a full feature length but for now, this is the introduction. This screenplay was heavily inspired by the enneagram and a play on it with each number personified as a person.

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Concept/Story/Structure: To start off, I am not sure what benefit is derived by posting an obviously incomplete script, however feedback is feedback and so I will do my best to comment upon what was submitted without the benefit of reading the rest of the story. Starting off with concept we have a person waking up on an island with no memory only to discover that she is not the only one who has suffered that same fate. Ok, then what? Where is the...

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