"Eclipsing Shadows: The Prophecy Unveiled" short
#Sci-Fi/Fantasy #Action/Adventure
In a realm where magic is outlawed, a young sorceress unearths an ancient prophecy, setting her on a path of self-discovery and rebellion as she confronts a ruthless queen and a malevolent sorcerer to bring about a brighter era in "Eclipsing Shadows: The prophecy unveiled"
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8 pages |
2 years ago
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Draft 1
"Eclipsing Shadows: The prophecy unveiled" is a thrilling fantasy adventure that follows Elara, a young sorceress, as she defies a kingdom's ban on magic. Guided by an ancient prophecy, Elara leads a rebellion alongside Aiden, a skilled warrior, to overthrow a tyrannical queen and a malevolent sorcerer. Their journey is a stirring tale of hope, unity, and the power of magic, ultimately heralding a brighter future for their realm.
Industry Reviews
overall, a solid idea for a fantasy script, and you know how to navigate the fantasy world with little effort. But the story needs to be strong in the aesthetic sense.
The main issue you need to tackle, however, is formatting. Right now, the script is formatted incorrectly. This is the equivalent of someone writing music the way they want to, but not the way that they're supposed to. I explain this more in the audio notes, but i would suggest...
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