Class of 23 feature

Overall, the script has the potential to be a solid vacation movie that I would consider a good family movie. The story is decently strong but still has to develop since it is unfinished. The structure needs some work, but I commented on what formatting needs to change. The characters are defined and notable as hell and will give you some laughs, but sometimes, the dialogue can be rough. An enjoyable read and I can't wait to see where it goes.