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The whole script is actually decently written. I could follow Ricki to her Party and have, almost, no problem with how she is written. Dave is ok, although it kind of disturbed me the way he immediately changes personality. The ending is kind of disturbing.
I liked the story and its "voice". I only found a few minor problems with it. But one problem was a rather hard and complete slap in the face. It kind of left me sitting there scratching my h...
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