I was surprised this rough-cut gem hasn’t already been reviewed. In the span of ten pages, this script crafts the framework of character development, a fairly good plot, and an unexpected but satisfying ending. This script could definitely become more extensive and well worth the effort of a rewrite.
Unfortunately, the script is riddled with punctuation, spelling, missing words, and formatting errors. This may be the reason it wasn’t reviewed...
Ben comes to the Fast Lane bowling alley everyday after school, partly because he idolizes amateur bowler, Jenny "The Comet" Cornell, and partly to escape some dark past.
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