Dear Clementine, (Draft 2) short

The concept is nice, especially the ending of the letter. This would make a good short film. Wonderful to see that type of message of appreciation for a past relationship.

The execution of the screenplay needs a lot of improvement. The flow and pacing as is would make this film hard to watch. It starts out too long just observing someone writing. The ending scenes as written are jumpy and would be hard to absorb and follow. The style of part a...