It is difficult to follow the story for a few reasons.
The formatting is not exactly the way it needs to be. I suggest researching scene headings and when continuous is used. Read a script of a film you know well enough to visualise. These can be found online on various sites. Several books and articles are available on how to lay out a screenplay as well.
The spelling and grammar has a lot of issues. It reads as though English is not the write...
The storyline, flashbacks, and progression of the script is incredibly unique and well-written, and gives the reader a thrill and better understanding of what is happening through the proper use of the elements of the screenplay. The story is also incredibly interesting, mind-gripping, leaving the reader at the edge of their seat at all times, and the characters have a lot of depth and development to them, which makes them more human and relatabl...
In World War II, George Gallant and The Newsreel Rejects must save the world from Viktor Von Kaiser, a sinister figure controlling the fate of nations.
It is 1945. Ripped from this world, hurled into a alien hell scape, a young American soldier must survive a deadly contest against a desperate Japanese enemy in a life and death race to reach a device that can send him home.
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