I know this is supposed to be for a mini-outline but I really would like another pair of eyes to look over this to see if I'm on the right track. I'm kind of sick of looking at this draft at the moment.
I liked this quite a bit. It's a lot better than most of the scripts I've read on here. I still stand that this should be much longer and have a bigger story and the flesh the characters out more. But other than that, good job.
A career criminal wakes up to find his wife murdered in their bed and their daughter missing. He must put the pieces together to find who committed the horrendous acts and exact revenge.
A man who desperately tries to keep himself away from humanity is forced back to his old town when the news finds him that his brother has passed away. Having to go back and face some demons along the way.
Poor Lisa. All she wanted to do was hang out with her cousin. Instead, she ended up in jail with no one to help her all because her cousin’s girlfriend decided to frame her but Lisa claims innocence. Is she innocent or guilty? You be the judge.
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