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By Kristian Smith

The unravelling of a rental scam set by two inexperienced con-men when one of them falls in love with one of their tenants who knows them and has been plotting her revenge against them the moment she figured them out.

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1 Reviews | 30 pages | 4 years ago | Draft 1

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Spiked seeks to test the meaning of what it takes to be a true friend in this buddy comedy streaming serial. This story takes place in a world where the unjust get their just, karma comes swift and hard and the universe aligns makers to meet their match. Before our heroes can become best friends again, they must overcome the love interest tied up in a failing rental scam they got themselves into.

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Great dialogue but a lot of basic mistakes early meant I didn't finish reading.

Straight off the bat, the wall of action paragraphs is really disengaging. I seem to be repeating this a lot lately, but the one piece of advice I've never forgotten since it was given to me, I'm about to give to you: every time you press 'Enter', the camera moves. It really is your best friend in this kind of situation. The first page really is far too crowded -- which I will illustrate in a moment and should be closer to 3.

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