Overall, this is a very entertaining read, mainly due to the supernatural concept, as well as the scenes which rely heavily on showing your audience this alternate reality. I would suggest maybe delving deeper into Elise's development, and give the supernatural characters more pull with regard to steering the story toward the climax. Otherwise, a very solid script!
The script is a creative piece with an engaging concept and intriguing characters. The suggestions aim to enhance character presentation, deepen dialogue, and refine structure for a more cohesive and engaging narrative. With these modifications, the script has the potential to not only capture the audience's imagination but also explore deeper themes of ethics, identity, and the pursuit of knowledge.
A desperate father visits a witch who has been chained to a tree, begs for the life of his child. Hopes that she will use her magic, but she demands a blood oat in return.
After society has fallen into another "Great Depression" an evil politic called The Dead takes control of the country and taking control of everyone lives. This leaves many to try and rid themselves in The Dreads plan, but sometimes it's not that easy.
**THIS IS A SKIT WRITTEN FOR A CONTEST UNDER A STRICT 2 PAGE REQUIREMENT. PLEASE DO NOT INCLUDE FEEDBACK ABOUT LENGTH IN YOUR REVIEW, AND KEEP THE MEDIUM IN MIND.** A man from the future must save an important target
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