Rebellion short

The first big issue with this script is the vast vagueness. There are no specifics or details to assist the story, plot, dialogue or characters. You need to get someone, you need to go someplace, you need get get something, they are hiding behind something, I have to be somewhere. The script seems to be trying to keep everything a secret from the reader. You don't learn much about the world they live in or the characters. This unfortunately makes...