Till death do us part short

The concept is interesting. You are quickly drawn into the story which obviously is essential given that the script is a short one. The scenes are well-written overall, with possibly some scope for tightening up the first half page, ideally cut down on the early action description set up regarding the shower scene which is a little dragged out.
The scene where the dad confront the bickering girls is very well written. This scene will be famili...