I will be focusing on format and style here rather than story. The first fifteen system to catch these issues doesn’t seem to work well simply because many of the reviewers are making the same mistakes as the authors. I urge everyone to invest in a hard copy format manual. The internet is no substitute.
I can see you building a rich world here. These kinds of fantasy scripts can be trickier to sell because you’re asking so much more of the rea...
A circle of man made stone obelisks emerge from the ground. They are 100ft high and total 5 miles wide, at the centre lies 4 pillars, covered in writing in 8 languages.
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