David Neklason

David N.

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David Neklason 1 year ago

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Proud Parent short
Genre: Drama,Mystery/Suspense
A cynical college student suspects something is amiss when her eccentric lab partner reveals she has a son.
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Proud Parent short
Genre: Drama,Mystery/Suspense
A cynical college student suspects something is amiss when her eccentric lab partner reveals she has a son.
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David Neklason 1 year ago

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Love Hurts short
Genre: Drama,Romance
When John keeps having the same recurring dream he can't help but feel worthless and helpless. One day everything changes when he spots Carol at a coffee shop and his dream changes to her.
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David Neklason 1 year ago

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Addicted short
Genre: Drama
A man deals with the consequences of his addictions in his personal and work life.
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David Neklason 1 year ago

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Lock Your Doors short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Thriller
Rating: 13%
Overall, there is a market for this type of film. The horror community loves this type of stuff. And home invasion thrillers are pretty easy and cheap to make. However, the writer needs to focus on giving this story more of a purpose for existing. Currently, the story is very weak. The break-in happens, violence ensues and most of them die. It's a pointless exercise in violence and the story completely falls flat. Giving the characters more compelling goals would breathe more life into this and perhaps help the story find its purpose. The antagonists need to be smarter, and therefore they will have a much more formidable presence and seem like a bigger threat. And if they have a better reason for executing their break-in plan (not just going after a trophy), it would be more compelling and probably scarier. Fleshing out the characters, giving them each more personality, and making the protagonists more relatable would make the audience want to root for them. In the current draft, the audience won't care of they live or die.
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David Neklason 1 year ago

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Lock Your Doors short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Thriller
A group of college students are rudely awakened by a trio of armed home invaders.
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David Neklason 1 year ago

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Proud Parent short
Genre: Drama,Mystery/Suspense
A cynical college student suspects something is amiss when her eccentric lab partner reveals she has a son.
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David Neklason 1 year ago

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Proud Parent short
Genre: Drama,Mystery/Suspense
A cynical college student suspects something is amiss when her eccentric lab partner reveals she has a son.