Two zany songwriters join a tipsy Englishman, his daughter, and a goofy helicopter pilot, rob some con men, run into trouble, and wind up in a horse-drawn wagon chase through Mexico.
This is an absurd, slapstick comedy farce, in the vein of “Caddy Shack”, “The Three Stooges”, “The Pink Panther”, “National Lampoon”, and “The Hangover”. Most of the humor features outrageous situations and stunts which suspend both belief and in some cases, the laws of gravity. WARNING: The comedy can be both raunchy and sexist at times, so if the reader is looking for a politically-correct, serious character study, this script is NOT for them.
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Five friends go on a vacation days before graduation. A series of unfortunate events occur on their way back home. Will they make it to graduation on time?.
Two sisters get sucked into an iconic sitcom "Laverne and Shirley" through a magical T.V. Suddenly, things begin to change the nerdy, but critical city of Milwaukee when 80's pop culture mixes in with late 50's culture.
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