Overall, a very good script that stands on its own. With some tweaks here and there, I would certainly feel comfortable submitting to competitions, or perhaps shopping it around.
Massay, a bullied teen, must survive the night with his friends and family in the Pine Barrens when the Jersey Devil chooses them to be his next contestants in its game of cat and mouse while coming to terms with his abusive father and learning the truth behind the Jersey Devil lore.
In the 16th century African State of Dande, a zealous young warrior must learn to work with a sworn enemy if he is to prevent the demise of his people.
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