Fate of Nations feature

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#Action/Adventure #War #Sci-Fi/Fantasy

In World War II, George Gallant and The Newsreel Rejects must save the world from Viktor Von Kaiser, a sinister figure controlling the fate of nations.

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1 Reviews | 90 pages | 2 years ago | Draft 1

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You've just won an all-expenses paid trip to Antarctica, where you'll discover Nazis on ice, future technologies, and cybernetic organisms! Strap in for a fun-filled, exciting trip to the past that could very well determine your future!

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World War II script is solid, but needs some fine tuning

This was a pretty good read on an action/sci-fi script taking place in World War II. The main thing I would work on to make a truly awesome script would be the character work to make everyone stand out more like they should. Hopefully my feedback will help you with future revision, good luck!

Cyle Brooks

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This was a pretty good read on an action/sci-fi script taking place in World War II. The main thing I would work on to make a truly awesome script would be the character work to make everyone stand out more like they should. Hopefully my feedback will help you with future revision, good luck!

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This was a pretty good read on an action/sci-fi script taking place in World War II. The main thing I would work on to make a truly awesome script would be the character work to make everyone stand out more like they should. Hopefully my feedback will help you with future revision, good luck!

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