Fate of Nations feature
#Action/Adventure #War #Sci-Fi/Fantasy
In World War II, George Gallant and The Newsreel Rejects must save the world from Viktor Von Kaiser, a sinister figure controlling the fate of nations.
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1 Reviews |
90 pages |
3 years ago
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Draft 1
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Industry Reviews
This was a pretty good read on an action/sci-fi script taking place in World War II. The main thing I would work on to make a truly awesome script would be the character work to make everyone stand out more like they should. Hopefully my feedback will help you with future revision, good luck!
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