Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
A grieving writer stands on the point of giving everything up, including his own life. Then a mysterious hotel comes calling. Could the hotel give him the inspiration he desperately seeks? Could it bring him joy again? The UnDying Craven opens it's doors.
After surviving genocide, enduring extreme Nazi forced labor and Allied bombings, a Ukrainian teenager must sacrifice his first love and risk his life to escape Stalin's forced labor, outwit a Soviet General, and return to his family. Inspired by a true story.
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