Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
A family on the brink of collapse tries to reconnect at a quaint Bed and Breakfast for the weekend, but a supernatural evil in the house has other plans.
A nuclear physicist is discretely contracted by an infamous anti- terrorist organization to formulate and manufacture an anti- terrorist weapon that turns his world into a nightmare, as he must abide to terrorist demands to save his family.
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