A DAY IN PASADENA feature

In the slug lines, you should avoid putting in a character’s name unless you are switching from one locale to another. Example: “Detective Wes’ Home (Bathroom). “ This should read something similar to INT./EXT. BATHROOM –MORNING
Then you describe the room. Give us visual cues of whether or not it’s a hotel bathroom, or a one-bedroom apartment bathroom, or a rundown suburban home. What furniture, what do the walls look like, things like this. Lo...