Dumb F-cking Animals feature
#Action/Adventure #Animation #Comedy
By
Cyle
Brooks
They may be cute, but they ain't cuddly.
Awards
Approved
Winner Draft #1
Summary
5 Reviews |
75 pages |
3 years ago
|
Draft 1
Sprinkles, a stuffed unicorn, and his best friend/roommate, Kaw, are both going about their days when Kaw decides to take Sprinkles to a club. Everything is going well until a trio of vicious animals attack the club. Before they know it, Sprinkles and Kaw find themselves on the run as one of them is being targeted for an experiment called "Project Sugarcoat" run by a mythical madman named Dr. Chimera.
Contains pervasive language, strong crude sexual content, drug use and bloody violence.
Contains pervasive language, strong crude sexual content, drug use and bloody violence.
Industry Reviews
Overall, it's a funny, over-the-top concept that I think audiences will appreciate. The story itself needs more dimension. If the plot and dialogue don't match the creativity of the concept, it will ultimately fall flat. There's definitely room for this script to grow.
Top Reviewer
Peer Reviews
I hope the dirge of notes isn't discouraging, I think everything you wrote is good, these are
just some ways I think you can make your story great.
You do a good job quickly establishing that even though there are talking animals
this is not a kids show (if the title didn't give it away already). F-bomb on
the first page, murder on the fourth.
Pg. 4
Love the contrast of a cutesy unicorn and stuffed animal crow working out and smoking...
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