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By David Serra

A young man and his friends try to survive the carnage strange creatures, regenerated by an alien experiment, bring to a small town.

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#Aliens #thriller ##alien technology #creatures
A young man and his friends find themselves in a fight for survival when an alien experiment crash lands on Earth and regenerates strange and ferocious creatures from their bones and oil.

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A fine start, but a lack of structure means an undersized story, with under-written characters, and only occasionally witty dialogue.
It's a fine start, but I feel like your story is missing a couple of key ingredients:

1) The concept is fine, but flawed in some key ways. Unless you're an established writer, no one is going to want to make a high-budget monster disaster movie. It'll be too expensive. These movies tend to be heavy on spectacle, light on substance, and there's nothing wrong with that, but in order to get your foot in the door, you'll need to write a story that...
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