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Biltmore Pilot: Joey's Race television

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#Comedy #Family #History

By Luke Shumaker

Following the daily life of garage owner Joey Biltmore and his friends and family in 1950s New York City.

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1 Reviews | 32 pages | 1 year ago | Draft 1

#New York ##tvseries #1950s #Sit-Com ##pilot episode ##comedy

Joey Biltmore, owner and operator of the Biltmore Garage gets into a situation of not being able to be in two places at once.

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Over all the script is really good. Well written and funny.

Overall I would love to see this series develop. I like the characters, the setting, and definitely the period! It was funny, charming, and very well done!
I like the idea of the story. A person trying to be in 2 places at once; however, I would have explored this idea further. There was no sense of urgency or panic really. I really do love the idea of Joey using a customer's car to enter a race. But we never actually witness him crashing...

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